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Polly Walker Blakemore's avatar

Lea's recollections remind me of time I spent both with my grandmother and mother toward the ends of their lives, each dying of dementia. My grandmother kept week-to-week calendars that she intricately annotated with notes about the weather, her aching back, the medicine she took, and so on. As her mind faded she annotated less. A month before she died she wrote her last word in her calendar: Clear. I have wondered, what, exactly, was clear? The weather? Her life? Her mind?

A few months before my mother died I sat beside her as she held my hands. She was only intermittently cogent at this point but she looked at me, a few tears coming from her eyes, and said, "Do you know what I am thinking?" "What?" I asked. I waited. And waited. And waited, and never got an answer. The circuit shorted. That's life! And death.

Jeff Koehler's avatar

What a beautiful memory shared, thank you.. Made me have flashes of my daughter and I that have yet to come....what a wonderful world!

Phyllis Roach's avatar

This poignant piece took me back to my dear dad's final days which began with a broken hip, elicited broken memories, and at 98 was his path to joining his beloved in heaven.

Sue Sutherland-Wood's avatar

Breathtaking, poignant writing, the kind that stays with you. Thank you for sharing.

Sydney Lea's avatar

Thank YOU for the kind comment!

Kirie Pedersen's avatar

You mention that bird and mammal populations are shrinking, changing, or vanishing in your sixty years paddling across the continent from me. I've lived on a strip of waterfront backed by forest near the northwest tip of the continental United States off and on for seventy-four years. This year in particular, I mourn bird and mammal species I no longer see. For many years, when seabirds rested here during migration, it seemed one could walk the mile across the bay on a bridge made of birds. Always a great blue heron perched just above my cabin. Golden and ruby-crowed kinglets, creepers, nuthatches, bushtits, hummingbirds, and chickadees fed in large vocalizing groups all around my cabin and throughout the forest. Now the heron is gone. I hardly see any "thumb birds" as I called the groups. I'm trying to preserve some spots of habitat here, beach and forest, in perpetuity, and keep my hopes up, seemingly at odds with the world, that we can somehow turn some aspects of life around.

Gabi Coatsworth's avatar

I’ve heard these musings on what comes next from people at the end of their lives. The talk of rivers and roads, the self-quest about possible sins which presumably might keep them from heaven and the decision that (this life) ain’t it - even from non-believers who perhaps wish they did believe…

Christine Beck's avatar

There must be something. What a powerful statement. And you and he were part of that something.

alice-ann hoefkens's avatar

This piece resonated so deeply with me. I bought a book for my mother in law ‘Lost Words’ when her ability to communicate was compromised by dementia. The illustrations spoke eloquently enough to animate her face as she looked through it. You’ve caught and shared the catch of your neighbour’s essence with us. Thank you. We are connected.❤️

Laura Sturza's avatar

Lovely. Thank you for bringing us into your neighbor's home with you.

Lynn Reuschell's avatar

I’m heading out the door right now to a funeral, and this is especially poignant. Thank you for doing the work that you do.

Pam Reese's avatar

Thanks for sharing. It was beautifully written and I know that neighbor.

Erika Andersen's avatar

Sad and lovely. A deeply poetic eulogy.

Dispatches from Tomorrow Land's avatar

“And how untethered do I want my thoughts to be anyhow?” Exactly, this. What a beautiful piece. I love essays that feel a bit like canoeing- gliding along, seeing what we see, but it’s not all tied up in a bow. Great piece.

Roshni Robert's avatar

Beautifully written. This took me right back to my Grampa’s bedside.

Holly Starley's avatar

“There must be something.” What a thing to contemplate.

Molly E's avatar

"This ain’t it." What a tagline.

Sandra Austin Mello's avatar

A naturalist, existentialist.